Rosie, you are showing the qualities of an independent and focused learner. You asked for support to work on adding detail and we looked at the best way to show the reader by using creative words. It is exciting to see how motivated and proud you are to share your learning.
Rosie, I was delighted to hear your teacher reading your story to the class. Your story was very interesting with lots of creative detail. I can't wait to read/hear more. love mum x
Rosie, you are showing the qualities of an independent and focused learner. You asked for support to work on adding detail and we looked at the best way to show the reader by using creative words. It is exciting to see how motivated and proud you are to share your learning.
ReplyDeleteRosie, I was delighted to hear your teacher reading your story to the class. Your story was very interesting with lots of creative detail. I can't wait to read/hear more. love mum x
ReplyDeletehi Rosie i really like the detail and big words you put into your story, and the fact that you know those words is even better!
ReplyDeleteHi this dolphin 🐬 is the cutest thing ever
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